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   Vivian laid in bed stairing at the ceiling,it had been a year since she movedbut the events that occured in Maryland still haunted her mind. She still thought the night that she saved Aiden from Axel. Vivian chuckled,"I can't believe I had feelings for that jerk!" Then she decided to take a nap before shewent out for her evening run with Gabriel. As for the rest of the pack, the five were still causing mischief but nothing to harmful. All they did was cause scenes during the day and scared the crap out of humans at night when they were in their true form. Wolves were normal in Vermont so no one reported their run ins with them.Esme` no longer ot into fights with Astrid since Vivian became leader. All the others just ate and slept during the day and ran throughout the nights.The pack was finally able to relax now that they didn't have to worry about gossip and news reports of "werewolves" killing innocent people.
   It was about midnight and the pack was wide awake they all slowly changed into werewolves and scurried outside. The harvest moon shone beautiful that night. Vivian and Gabriel strayed away from the pack to go down a secret trail that led to a beautiful stream. The path was aligned with a mixture of treeand bushes. The sweet aroma of the flowers lingered in the air. Soon the path ended and and the couple was allowed to do whatever they pleased without annoying interuptions from the others. Vivian chased the minnows in the water while her mate covered their tracks."It's beautiful tonight>" Vivian thought aloud. "I can't believe you didn't notice." said Gabe "What?" Vivian was trying to think of what Gabe was talking about but she didn't recall anything. "Oh nothing, just the fact that tonight is the anniversery of Axel's death." He muttered. "Oh, so that's why everyone's in such a good mood." She laughed. Axel was a horrible man and werewolf,he brought chaos and destruction everywhere he went and the pack was glad he was gone. Most people say that it's horrible happy about someone's death but those people don't know how many people he killed and the excruciating pain he put everone through. Before they could realize it the sun was about to rise. They had to hurry home before humans spotted them. Vivian was running so fast she could hardley breathe and the branches were hitting against her like whips but she had no time to think about the pain. When she transformed into a human again you could easily see the large cuts that were impossible to cover up. She was used to the pain that came with being a werewolf but she was afraid of what everyone at school might think. All she could do now was wash the blood away and think of an excuse when the time comes.

  

                              To be continued..................
:iconlocababy007:
I wrote this over the summer when I finished the book Blood and Chocolate. Its ok i guess but i dont think its my best work but i do have a hell of an imagination. Please tell me what you think even if it sucks... i need some criticisim anyway.
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~ILoveAnimeAndDisney Apr 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Please continue to write this story!! :heart:
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:iconart4aguilera:
P.S: I ABSOLUTELY HATED HOLLYWOODS VERSION OF THE BOOK! i DISPISE Katja von Garnier for it!!!
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:iconart4aguilera:
You need to pay better attention to the book! Axel never met Aiden and she never saved him from anyone! She just jumped in the way of his gun to save Gabreil! And Gabreil is leader, Vivian is Queen Bitch! And by God thats it! I'm going to write a more accurate version of a Blood and Chocolate II. Sorry about being so rude but I am a very dedicated fan of this book and it saddens me to see people don't understand enough about the book even when they have read it!
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:iconannabethchase758865:
I loved the book and I loved this new part write more please thank you
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:iconizabelmorgan:
this should be added onto blood and chocolate that book is second to the twilight series for me
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:iconlocalo:
Had a few mistakes, astrid was killed by gabriel, and vivian saved aiden from astrid and rafe, but other than that it was good =]
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~horror-lover Oct 4, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
wait a minute. i thought astrid was killed by gabriel in the 1st book becuz she'd killed people and tried to frame vivian
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:iconlocababy007:
oh wow you're right im sorry. i wrote that story so long ago and i haven't read the in almost two years. but to be honest i still need quite a bit of work on my writing skills. although it's just a fan fic, the onyl one i've ever written. but thank you for the correction i never would have caught that and i wouldn't be inspired to re-read one of my old favorite books :)!
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:icongryphonheart25:
Werewolves kick ass! I haven't read the book yet, but i've seen the movie. Are they similar at all?
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:iconlocababy007:
they arent really similar. the book is way better (im sure youve heard that a million times!) the movie was good but the book was WOW! so yeah definately read it!
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